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the original by Edward Lear:
*[[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]:
 
*:My all-time pet peeve for that is '''traji''', whose x4 was inexplicably pushed back for x2 and x3, violating the parallel with '''zmadu'''. It makes havoc with dikyjvo, of course. This I could convince noone on, even while we could still have changed the place structures.
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**This isn't an instance of [[Bloated Gismu Syndrome|Bloated Gismu Syndrome]], but I agree. Most of the time when I see more than one place of anything based on '''traji''', I'm extremely confused as to which place it's supposed to be filling. The comparison with '''mutce''' is bogus, in my opinion. I've heard of deciding <u>which</u> places are included based on comparisons with other gismu, but using a comparison with another gismu to fix the <u>order</u> when a different interpretation is so obviously better? It seems to be specific to '''traji'''.
 
***[[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]:
There was an old lady from Riga
***:Of course, my own argument on the place structure of '''traji''' was based on parallelism with '''zmadu''' rather than parallelism to mutce, but I see your point.
 
****I thought that [[Lojban Central|Lojban Central]]'s argument was based on a parallelism to '''mutce''', since supposedly '''ka zmadu''' and '''ka mleca''' are sumti of '''traji'''.
Who rode with a smile on a tiger
*****[[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]:
 
*****:Oh, I'm not disagreeing. I'm just saying that my own primary motivation was probably that I did want '''traji''' to follow another gismu's ordering, but that was '''zmadu''' to me, not '''mutce'''. And I guess this means I don't like the x3 of '''traji''' after all.
They came back from the ride
*As far as I'm concerned, the place structure of '''traji''' is: ''x1 is most among x2 in property x3 <nowiki>[in direction x4*]</nowiki>''
 
**[[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]:
With the lady inside
**:OK. But as far as I'm concerned ([[fundamentalism|fundamentalism]]), the place structure of '''traji''' is set, and inviolable. Regrettable, but involable.
 
*[[Adam|Adam]]:
And a smile on the face of the tiger
**Do you want to speak a language which throws a brick wall in front of you every 2-3 sentences or one which flows smoothly and naturally?
 
***[[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]:
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***: *smile* I want to speak a language in which there is one commonly accepted and used place structure for ''traji'', rather than Adam's-traji versus nitcion's-traji vs. Lojbab's-traji. I also want to speak a language in which we don't spend ANOTHER SEVEN YEARS arguing about the place structure of ''traji'', when we haven't even worked out ''fa'a''. So in answer to your question, yes, I'd rather the brick walls, if that means we all speak the same language. I'd rather a clumsy but unified Lojban, than a smooth Lojban Mark 1 and another smooth Lojban Mark 2 and a third smooth Lojban Mark 3. (raising fundamentalist bugbears).
 
*[[Adam|Adam]]:
As always, translating poetry is stupidly pointless, but leads to some very lojbykai stuff. [[jbocre: .greg.|greg.]] would be grateful for any better translation which truly rimes.
**:It would be better just to have a separate gismu for ''least''.
 
**[[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]:
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**:'''traji''' = ''most'', new gismu = ''least'', drop the x3, right?
 
*[[rab.spir|rab.spir]]:
se zasti lo ninmu poi cisma
*:Why not solve this with a lujvo, so you don't have to reassign a place structure?
 
*'''raizma (traji zmadu)''' = ''z1=t1 is most among z2=t4 in property z3=t2''
ca le nu lo tirxu cu xelkla
*:(The z4 and t3 places cancel each other out, as they end up being '''ka ce'u traji''' and '''ka ce'u zmadu''' respectively. Nifty, isn't it?)
 
*:And of course, the separate word for ''least'':
.i ri ra pu xruti
*'''rairme'a (traji mleca)''' = ''z1=m1 is least among z2=m4 in property z3=m2''
 
*:So exactly the place structures you wanted are provided by '''[[seljvajvo|seljvajvo]]''', at the expense of an extra syllable if you want to use these in larger lujvo.
je ji'a se nenri
**[[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]:
 
**:'''.i do ba'e glekygau mi ba'o lo nandu djedi ki'e'''
.i po'o le tirxu cu cisma
**[[Adam|Adam]]:
 
**:Nice try, but I don't like it for the same reason I don't like '''me'anrai''' for ''least''. These are [[gismu != primitives|basic concepts, and need a gismu]]. Still, I could <u>almost</u> live with it. (Not "unanalyzable concepts" but basic concepts in their usefulness for speaking.)
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***:'''me'anrai'''? I've already got '''rairme'a''' right there. And '''me'anrai''' would give exactly the wrong place structure.
 
***:Anyway, I know it would be nice if this could be done with a single gismu - but the gismu list is the way it is. If you <u>insist</u> on attempting to change the gismu list, I suggest not taking over an existing gismu, but using [[experimental gismu|unofficial gismu]]. Perhaps '''razma''' and '''rarme'''?
''Should {terkla} be {xelkla}? I thought of the tiger as being her vehicle, not her place of origin. --[[jbocre: pne|pne]]''
****Adam:
 
****:Okay, maybe. But remember that even [[the Book|the Book]] agrees that the above is the place structure for lujvo which end in -'''-rai'''.
*of course, I was working on something like {te litru} to rime with {tirxu} at one point and couldn't make it work ; the {te} stayed over when I changed to {klama} --[[jbocre: .greg.|greg.]]
*****[[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]:
 
*****:Because (yes, I'm coming clean), I thought it was obvious that '''-rai''' lujvo would be ''most'', not ''least'', and the comparandum should be the x2. I abide by this inconsistency, 'cause I hate '''traji''', and if I'm going to propose a capricious place structure, I might as well do it for a whole entire class of 'em, where it's conspicuous and people can raise their objections right away. Yes, I am a hypocrite; you got me. (OTOH, John wasn't obligated to agree with me, but he did.) But I still think you can do that for lujvo, where there is some wiggle room in what the place structure will be, but not for gismu, where the place structure is baselined.
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''I (mi'e noras.) can make almost-rhyme if I mangle the meaning a bit:''
 
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mi penmi lo ninmu poi virnu
 
.i ny cmila co selbei lo tirxu
 
.i ba le nunpenmi
 
le ninmu cu nenri
 
le tirxu noi cisma co kirclu
 
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''With just-as-mangled back-translation to English that rhymes:''
 
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I once met a woman quite daring
 
who (smiling), a tiger was bearing.
 
But after we "bye"-ed
 
She wound up inside,
 
and the tiger a full smile was wearing.
 
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*Nice, I'm not quite sure about all those cute {co}'s though, especially the last one. I'm overawed by what is either a mastery of the vocabulary or a very quick eye for making lujvo which fit a pattern. The VC*C rhyming is nice! - mi'e [[jbocre: .greg.|greg]]

Latest revision as of 17:38, 25 September 2014

  • nitcion:
    My all-time pet peeve for that is traji, whose x4 was inexplicably pushed back for x2 and x3, violating the parallel with zmadu. It makes havoc with dikyjvo, of course. This I could convince noone on, even while we could still have changed the place structures.
    • This isn't an instance of Bloated Gismu Syndrome, but I agree. Most of the time when I see more than one place of anything based on traji, I'm extremely confused as to which place it's supposed to be filling. The comparison with mutce is bogus, in my opinion. I've heard of deciding which places are included based on comparisons with other gismu, but using a comparison with another gismu to fix the order when a different interpretation is so obviously better? It seems to be specific to traji.
      • nitcion:
        Of course, my own argument on the place structure of traji was based on parallelism with zmadu rather than parallelism to mutce, but I see your point.
        • I thought that Lojban Central's argument was based on a parallelism to mutce, since supposedly ka zmadu and ka mleca are sumti of traji.
          • nitcion:
            Oh, I'm not disagreeing. I'm just saying that my own primary motivation was probably that I did want traji to follow another gismu's ordering, but that was zmadu to me, not mutce. And I guess this means I don't like the x3 of traji after all.
  • As far as I'm concerned, the place structure of traji is: x1 is most among x2 in property x3 [in direction x4*]
    • nitcion:
      OK. But as far as I'm concerned (fundamentalism), the place structure of traji is set, and inviolable. Regrettable, but involable.
  • Adam:
    • Do you want to speak a language which throws a brick wall in front of you every 2-3 sentences or one which flows smoothly and naturally?
      • nitcion:
        *smile* I want to speak a language in which there is one commonly accepted and used place structure for traji, rather than Adam's-traji versus nitcion's-traji vs. Lojbab's-traji. I also want to speak a language in which we don't spend ANOTHER SEVEN YEARS arguing about the place structure of traji, when we haven't even worked out fa'a. So in answer to your question, yes, I'd rather the brick walls, if that means we all speak the same language. I'd rather a clumsy but unified Lojban, than a smooth Lojban Mark 1 and another smooth Lojban Mark 2 and a third smooth Lojban Mark 3. (raising fundamentalist bugbears).
  • Adam:
    • It would be better just to have a separate gismu for least.
    • nitcion:
      traji = most, new gismu = least, drop the x3, right?
  • rab.spir:
    Why not solve this with a lujvo, so you don't have to reassign a place structure?
  • raizma (traji zmadu) = z1=t1 is most among z2=t4 in property z3=t2
    (The z4 and t3 places cancel each other out, as they end up being ka ce'u traji and ka ce'u zmadu respectively. Nifty, isn't it?)
    And of course, the separate word for least:
  • rairme'a (traji mleca) = z1=m1 is least among z2=m4 in property z3=m2
    So exactly the place structures you wanted are provided by seljvajvo, at the expense of an extra syllable if you want to use these in larger lujvo.
    • nitcion:
      .i do ba'e glekygau mi ba'o lo nandu djedi ki'e
    • Adam:
      Nice try, but I don't like it for the same reason I don't like me'anrai for least. These are basic concepts, and need a gismu. Still, I could almost live with it. (Not "unanalyzable concepts" but basic concepts in their usefulness for speaking.)
      • me'anrai? I've already got rairme'a right there. And me'anrai would give exactly the wrong place structure.
        Anyway, I know it would be nice if this could be done with a single gismu - but the gismu list is the way it is. If you insist on attempting to change the gismu list, I suggest not taking over an existing gismu, but using unofficial gismu. Perhaps razma and rarme?
        • Adam:
          Okay, maybe. But remember that even the Book agrees that the above is the place structure for lujvo which end in --rai.
          • nitcion:
            Because (yes, I'm coming clean), I thought it was obvious that -rai lujvo would be most, not least, and the comparandum should be the x2. I abide by this inconsistency, 'cause I hate traji, and if I'm going to propose a capricious place structure, I might as well do it for a whole entire class of 'em, where it's conspicuous and people can raise their objections right away. Yes, I am a hypocrite; you got me. (OTOH, John wasn't obligated to agree with me, but he did.) But I still think you can do that for lujvo, where there is some wiggle room in what the place structure will be, but not for gismu, where the place structure is baselined.