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== others ==
== others ==
* misuse of the term alphabet https://github.com/lojban/cll/issues/294
* [https://github.com/lojban/cll/issues/294 294]: misuse of the term alphabet
* internal grammar of UI https://github.com/lojban/cll/issues/333
* [https://github.com/lojban/cll/issues/333 333]: internal grammar of UI
* ch 7 Section 6, the exceptions to the anaphora rules are almost certainly incomplete. In particular "ma" and "ce'u" definitely warrant exceptions.
* add missing parts from nitcion's https://mw.lojban.org/papri/lujvo_place_structure and https://mw.lojban.org/papri/Pro-sumti/pro-bridi_paper,_draft_1.1
* ch 10 12 Section 12, the explanation of the meaning of the second "pu" in example 12.2 conflicts with the rule in section 13 that tenses in subordinate bridi are relative to the tense of the main bridi.
*18.19 and 19.7 - merge into one
*11.12 The phrase {le ka la frank ciska} is glossed as "The quality-of Frank's writing". {ka} glosses to the word "property", and the Lojban doesn't talk at all about quality (as in jezyprane), so I believe the word "quality" was accidentally put there, having bled into the interlinear gloss from the author's intended natural English translation. That said, I (Zort) believe the gloss should be "The property-that Frank writes". That said, I (still Zort) have a humble suggestion for a demonstration of this section's grammatical feature, a cynical little observation, that has occured in my Lojban speech "in the wild", and perhaps therefore proves at least some usefulness of this grammatical feature: {le'e prenu cu djica lo mu'e jenai za'i gunka}.
*The tengwar table should use actual tengwar in addition to their names, since we now have Unicode (CSUR) and good fonts.
*4.7 In the procedure for making a non-Lojban word into a valid Stage 3 fu'ivla, double consonants are to be eliminated before the sounds are to be converted to their closest Lojban equivalents, but it is possible that consecutive consonants have different sounds (like in 'eccentric'). So these actions should swap places. The same goes for section 8, in the procedure for Lojbanizing a name.
*Chapter 10 It would be nice if there was a template for compound tenses around the end of the chapter, like the template for compound cnima'o in chapter 13 section 8.
*Chapter 10 It would be nice if there was a template for compound tenses around the end of the chapter, like the template for compound cnima'o in chapter 13 section 8.
** add charts from http://vrici.lojban.org/~gleki/glekitufa/tiddlydict/fricukt.html and https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1cINB29VFknkdMfmY9X1bgtS-j8vKKVdwtFiyEInN2l0/edit?usp=sharing
** add charts from http://vrici.lojban.org/~gleki/glekitufa/tiddlydict/fricukt.html and https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1cINB29VFknkdMfmY9X1bgtS-j8vKKVdwtFiyEInN2l0/edit?usp=sharing
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* A lot of this terminology is used without being defined. We should formally define the terminology that is import to understanding the grammar and syntax of Lojban, preferably in a sidebar outside of the main text.
* A lot of this terminology is used without being defined. We should formally define the terminology that is import to understanding the grammar and syntax of Lojban, preferably in a sidebar outside of the main text.
** superfective
** superfective
** change def of co'i https://groups.google.com/d/msg/bpfk-list/n_Qs17M29lY/o2BnHtIYyKMJ
** telicity and perfectivity https://www.dropbox.com/s/r4eowtdeorjyj56/borik-reinhart.pdf?dl=0
* add '''cu''' after all cmevla when '''CMEVLA brivla''' constructs arises otherwise
* add '''cu''' after all cmevla when '''CMEVLA brivla''' constructs arises otherwise
* ??? can't confirm. ch3. Section 2, page 30. for the second eng (immediately to the left of "(may be syllabic)") the syllabicity marker is concealed by the right tail. I can just barely see the marker under a good light.
* ??? can't confirm. ch3. Section 2, page 30. for the second eng (immediately to the left of "(may be syllabic)") the syllabicity marker is concealed by the right tail. I can just barely see the marker under a good light.

Revision as of 08:43, 12 July 2019

An ever-being-updated list of suggestions for the next revision of CLL:

active PRs, problematic or those that must be active

others

  • 294: misuse of the term alphabet
  • 333: internal grammar of UI
  • Chapter 10 It would be nice if there was a template for compound tenses around the end of the chapter, like the template for compound cnima'o in chapter 13 section 8.
  • see what's left at CLL, aka Reference Grammar, Errata
  • take parts from suggestions for CLL, second edition here and there
  • ch3. Section 6, restriction no. 2 already forbids 8 of the 12 consonant pairs that are forbidden by restriction no. 3; perhaps it's better to just explicitly forbid the pairs "cs", "jz", "sc" and "zj" like in the last restriction.
  • A lot of this terminology is used without being defined. We should formally define the terminology that is import to understanding the grammar and syntax of Lojban, preferably in a sidebar outside of the main text.
    • superfective
  • add cu after all cmevla when CMEVLA brivla constructs arises otherwise
  • ??? can't confirm. ch3. Section 2, page 30. for the second eng (immediately to the left of "(may be syllabic)") the syllabicity marker is concealed by the right tail. I can just barely see the marker under a good light.
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