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le saske smani (Tiki thread #5887)

Re: le saske smani

adamgarrigus · 2006-07-28 23:46 UTC · Tiki post #5888 (reply to #5887)

Thanks again, xorxes. This was a real & inspiring pleasure. A couple of comments:

Paragraph 1 ^ni'o bu'u lo ~~#FF0000:sicyxindo~~ daplu lo zdani cu jibni lo ricfoi^ Given that "West Indies" is an erroneous term, I question whether the calque sicyxindo is the best translation. Perhaps me la karib would be better.

Paragraph 3 ^ni'o ku'i le saske smani cu jajgau lo so'o citmau smani lo sepli diklo gi'e ~~#FF0000:jundi zmadu se tirna~~^ Do you need se jundi zmadu se tirna or else se tirju'i zmadu here?

Paragraph 4 ^i lu pa mai sei le prije cu cusku lo remna cu xusra lo du'u ma'a na cortu gi'e zmidai i se ki'u bo mi prane zifre lo nu xusra lo mintu lo ~~#FF0000:remna~~ i lu la'e di'u cu cizra sei le darlu nelci cu cusku i ji'a du'ospo i ga nai zmidai gi ctuca ma'a no da ma'a i ga nai ctuca su'o da gi to io branarge toi ja'a cortu li'u^ I think you skipped a li'u after remna.

mu'o mi'e komfo,amonan no'u va'i zoi gy adamgarrigus gy

le saske smani

Anonymous · 2006-07-31 13:34 UTC · Tiki post #5892 (reply to #5887)

On 7/28/06, adamgarrigus <[email protected]> wrote:

> Re: le saske smani > Thanks again, xorxes. This was a real & inspiring pleasure. A couple of comments:

ki'e doi komfo

> Paragraph 1 > ^ni'o bu'u lo ~~#FF0000:sicyxindo~~ daplu lo zdani cu jibni lo ricfoi^ > Given that "West Indies" is an erroneous term, I question whether the calque sicyxindo is the best translation. Perhaps me la karib would be better.

I don't know. The name reflects the history of the place. I'm not saying this should be the preferred name for the region, but it's common enough.


> Paragraph 3 > ^ni'o ku'i le saske smani cu jajgau lo so'o citmau smani lo sepli diklo gi'e ~~#FF0000:jundi zmadu se tirna~~^ > Do you need se jundi zmadu se tirna or else se tirju'i zmadu here?

In a tanru, the transformation of anything other than the tertau doesn't usually contribute much. I was thinking {se tirna be lo jundi zmadu}.

> Paragraph 4 > ^i lu pa mai sei le prije cu cusku lo remna cu xusra lo du'u ma'a na cortu gi'e zmidai i se ki'u bo mi prane zifre lo nu xusra lo mintu lo ~~#FF0000:remna~~ i lu la'e di'u cu cizra sei le darlu nelci cu cusku i ji'a du'ospo i ga nai zmidai gi ctuca ma'a no da ma'a i ga nai ctuca su'o da gi to io branarge toi ja'a cortu li'u^ > I think you skipped a li'u after remna.

je'e

ki'e mi'e xorxes

le saske smani

Anonymous · 2008-09-14 17:53 UTC · Tiki post #7202 (reply to #5887)

On Sun, Sep 14, 2008 at 1:47 PM, arj <[email protected]> wrote:

> > doi xorxes ma selcme le se fanva be fu ti .i milxe vajni tu'a zoi zoi [1] zoi

zoi zoi The Scientific Ape zoi cu glico tcita lo lisri

le saske smani

arj · 2008-09-14 19:01 UTC · Tiki post #7203 (reply to #5887)

On Sun, Sep 14, 2008 at 02:53:01PM -0300, Jorge Llambías wrote:

> On Sun, Sep 14, 2008 at 1:47 PM, arj <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > doi xorxes ma selcme le se fanva be fu ti .i milxe vajni tu'a zoi zoi [2] zoi > > zoi zoi The Scientific Ape zoi cu glico tcita lo lisri

.ua ki'e .i mi facki le se fanva .i ta'o pe'i zo mivyka'a cu xlali xe fanva zoi gy vivisectionist gy ki'u le za'o le'e katna cu prenu na .e tutci

ni'o ku'i zo mivyka'a na vajni .i mi zmadu se cinri zo pa'o

-- Arnt Richard Johansen http://arj.nvg.org/ [Bert Tyler] has been in programming since he got a job at the computer center in his sophomore year at college - in other words, he hasn't done

an honest day's work in his life. -- Fractint v20.0 documentation

le saske smani (Tiki thread #7200)

Re: le saske smani

arj · 2008-09-14 16:44 UTC · Tiki post #7201 (reply to #7200)

doi xorxes ma selcme le se fanva be fu ti .i milxe vajni tu'a zoi zoi [3] zoi