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Latest revision as of 15:35, 23 March 2014
The Watching Tanru: a lojban poetic form
Two line commentaries: the first line is a bridi without UI cmavo, describing reality. The second line is a commentary on this, as a tanru using only five selbri, and this tanru is "flat"; no be, be'o places. --xod
It might be better to insert sei between the two lines; otherwise, the second line becomes part of a 7-part tanru in the description that ends the first line.
An attempt (by Jordan DeLong e) to describe the form in lojban:
me la ctatanru
ni'o la ctatanru goi ko'a cu pemci se tamsmi .i lo pemci be setai
ko'a cu cusku pa jufra poi skicu tu'a da poi jetnu ku'o secau loi
cmavo be la'e zo .ui .ibabo cusku lo tanru selbri poi mu brivla cu
se vasru ke'a zi'e poi jufra catlu
mi ba'o finti le citno kampemci
sei cerni tatpi nalprane cinri nunfinti
de'a benji lo notci mi la jboste
sei cuntu mutce tatpi xo'a pismi hoa cabna
lu
le smaji nicte ca'o masno farvi
sei sipna claxu tcini rinka rigni
li'u
se finti la djorden. setai la ctatanru
lu
le stedu be mi cu spofu je blucri
sei cortu xlali cortu xlali cortu
li'u
se finti la djorden. setai la ctatanru