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the original by Edward Lear:
My all-time pet peeve for that is traji, whose x4 was inexplicably pushed back for x2 and x3, violating the parallel with zmadu. It makes havoc with dikyjvo, of course. This I could convince noone on, even while we could still have changed the place structures -- mi'e [[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]


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''This isn't an instance of [[Bloated Gismu Syndrome|Bloated Gismu Syndrome]], but I agree. Most of the time when I see more than one place of anything based on traji, I'm extremely confused as to which place it's supposed to be filling. The comparison with mutce is bogus, in my opinion. I've heard of deciding '''which''' places are included based on comparisons with other gismu, but using a comparison with another gismu to fix the '''order''' when a different interpretation is so obviously better? It seems to be specific to "traji".''


There was an old lady from Riga
* Of course, my own argument on the place structure of traji was based on parallelism with zmadu rather than parallelism to mutce, but I see your point. -- [[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]
** I thought that [[jbocre: Lojban Central|Lojban Central]]'s argument was based on a parallelism to ''mutce'', since supposedly ''ka zmadu'' and ''ka mleca'' are sumti of ''traji''.


Who rode with a smile on a tiger
**Oh, I'm not disagreeing. I'm just saying that my own primary motivation was probably that I did want ''traji'' to follow another gismu's ordering, but that was ''zmadu'' to me, not ''mutce''. And I guess this means I don't like the x3 of ''traji'' after all. -- [[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]


They came back from the ride
''As far as I'm concerned, the place structure of "traji" is: "x1 is most among x2 in property x3 [[jbocre: in direction x4*]]".''


With the lady inside
OK. But as far as I'm concerned ([[jbocre: fundamentalism|(fundamentalism]]), the place structure of traji is set, and inviolable. Regrettable, but involable. -- mi'e [[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]


And a smile on the face of the tiger
''Do you want to speak a language which throws a brick wall in front of you every 2-3 sentences or one which flows smoothly and naturally? -- [[jbocre: Adam|Adam]]''


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. *smile* I want to speak a language in which there is one commonly accepted and used place structure for ''traji'', rather than Adam's-traji versus nitcion's-traji vs. Lojbab's-traji. I also want to speak a language in which we don't spend ANOTHER SEVEN YEARS arguing about the place structure of ''traji'', when we haven't even worked out ''fa'a''. So in answer to your question, yes, I'd rather the brick walls, if that means we all speak the same language. I'd rather a clumsy but unified Lojban, than a smooth Lojban Mark 1 and another smooth Lojban Mark 2 and a third smooth Lojban Mark 3. -- [[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]], raising fundamentalist bugbears.


As always, translating poetry is stupidly pointless, but leads to some very lojbykai stuff. [[jbocre: .greg.|greg.]] would be grateful for any better translation which truly rimes.
''* It would be better just to have a separate gismu for "least".'' -- Adam


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[[jbocre: Please elaborate?]] I understand now from your response above. ''traji'' = most, new gismu = least, drop the x3, right? -- [[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]] ''drop x4 in the "real" place structure :-)''


se zasti lo ninmu poi cisma
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ca le nu lo tirxu cu xelkla
Why not solve this with a lujvo, so you don't have to reassign a place structure?


.i ri ra pu xruti
raizma: traji zmadu


je ji'a se nenri
z1=t1 is most among z2=t4 in property z3=t2


.i po'o le tirxu cu cisma
(The z4 and t3 places cancel each other out, as they end up being ''ka ce'u traji'' and ''ka ce'u zmadu'' respectively. Nifty, isn't it?)


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And of course, the separate word for "least":


''Should {terkla} be {xelkla}? I thought of the tiger as being her vehicle, not her place of origin. --[[jbocre: pne|pne]]''
rairme'a: traji mleca


*of course, I was working on something like {te litru} to rime with {tirxu} at one point and couldn't make it work ; the {te} stayed over when I changed to {klama} --[[jbocre: .greg.|greg.]]
z1=m1 is least among z2=m4 in property z3=m2


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So exactly the place structures you wanted are provided by ''[[jbocre: seljvajvo|seljvajvo]]'', at the expense of an extra syllable if you want to use these in larger lujvo.


''I (mi'e noras.) can make almost-rhyme if I mangle the meaning a bit:''
-- [[jbocre: rab.spir|rab.spir]]


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.i do ba'e glekygau mi ba'o lo nandu djedi ki'e -- mi'e [[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]]


mi penmi lo ninmu poi virnu
''Nice try, but I don't like it for the same reason I don't like "me'anrai" for "least". These are [[jbocre: gismu != primitives asic concepts, and need a gismu]]. Still, I could '''almost''' live with it. (Not "unanalyzable concepts" but basic concepts in their usefulness for speaking.) -- [[jbocre: Adam|Adam]]''


.i ny cmila co selbei lo tirxu
''me'anrai''? I've already got ''rairme'a'' right there. And ''me'anrai'' would give exactly the wrong place structure.


.i ba le nunpenmi
Anyway, I know it would be nice if this could be done with a single gismu - but the gismu list is the way it is. If you '''insist''' on attempting to change the gismu list, I suggest not taking over an existing gismu, but using [[jbocre: unofficial gismu|unofficial gismu]]. Perhaps ''razma'' and ''rarme''?


le ninmu cu nenri
''Okay, maybe. But remember that even [[the Book|the Book]] agrees that the above is the place structure for lujvo which end in -rai. -- Adam''


le tirxu noi cisma co kirclu
.... Because (yes, I'm coming clean), I thought it was obvious that -rai lujvo would be 'most', not 'least', and the comparandum should be the x2. I abide by this inconsistency, 'cause I hate ''traji'', and if I'm going to propose a capricious place structure, I might as well do it for a whole entire class of 'em, where it's conspicuous and people can raise their objections right away. Yes, I am a hypocrite; you got me. (OTOH, John wasn't obligated to agree with me, but he did.) But I still think you can do that for lujvo, where there is some wiggle room in what the place structure will be, but not for gismu, where the place structure is baselined. -- [[User:Nick Nicholas|nitcion]].
 
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''With just-as-mangled back-translation to English that rhymes:''
 
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I once met a woman quite daring
 
who (smiling), a tiger was bearing.
 
But after we "bye"-ed
 
She wound up inside,
 
and the tiger a full smile was wearing.
 
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*Nice, I'm not quite sure about all those cute {co}'s though, especially the last one. I'm overawed by what is either a mastery of the vocabulary or a very quick eye for making lujvo which fit a pattern. The VC*C rhyming is nice! - mi'e [[jbocre: .greg.|greg]]

Revision as of 17:16, 4 November 2013

My all-time pet peeve for that is traji, whose x4 was inexplicably pushed back for x2 and x3, violating the parallel with zmadu. It makes havoc with dikyjvo, of course. This I could convince noone on, even while we could still have changed the place structures -- mi'e nitcion

This isn't an instance of Bloated Gismu Syndrome, but I agree. Most of the time when I see more than one place of anything based on traji, I'm extremely confused as to which place it's supposed to be filling. The comparison with mutce is bogus, in my opinion. I've heard of deciding which places are included based on comparisons with other gismu, but using a comparison with another gismu to fix the order when a different interpretation is so obviously better? It seems to be specific to "traji".

  • Of course, my own argument on the place structure of traji was based on parallelism with zmadu rather than parallelism to mutce, but I see your point. -- nitcion
    • I thought that Lojban Central's argument was based on a parallelism to mutce, since supposedly ka zmadu and ka mleca are sumti of traji.
    • Oh, I'm not disagreeing. I'm just saying that my own primary motivation was probably that I did want traji to follow another gismu's ordering, but that was zmadu to me, not mutce. And I guess this means I don't like the x3 of traji after all. -- nitcion

As far as I'm concerned, the place structure of "traji" is: "x1 is most among x2 in property x3 jbocre: in direction x4*".

OK. But as far as I'm concerned ((fundamentalism), the place structure of traji is set, and inviolable. Regrettable, but involable. -- mi'e nitcion

Do you want to speak a language which throws a brick wall in front of you every 2-3 sentences or one which flows smoothly and naturally? -- Adam

. *smile* I want to speak a language in which there is one commonly accepted and used place structure for traji, rather than Adam's-traji versus nitcion's-traji vs. Lojbab's-traji. I also want to speak a language in which we don't spend ANOTHER SEVEN YEARS arguing about the place structure of traji, when we haven't even worked out fa'a. So in answer to your question, yes, I'd rather the brick walls, if that means we all speak the same language. I'd rather a clumsy but unified Lojban, than a smooth Lojban Mark 1 and another smooth Lojban Mark 2 and a third smooth Lojban Mark 3. -- nitcion, raising fundamentalist bugbears.

* It would be better just to have a separate gismu for "least". -- Adam

jbocre: Please elaborate? I understand now from your response above. traji = most, new gismu = least, drop the x3, right? -- nitcion drop x4 in the "real" place structure :-)


Why not solve this with a lujvo, so you don't have to reassign a place structure?

raizma: traji zmadu

z1=t1 is most among z2=t4 in property z3=t2

(The z4 and t3 places cancel each other out, as they end up being ka ce'u traji and ka ce'u zmadu respectively. Nifty, isn't it?)

And of course, the separate word for "least":

rairme'a: traji mleca

z1=m1 is least among z2=m4 in property z3=m2

So exactly the place structures you wanted are provided by seljvajvo, at the expense of an extra syllable if you want to use these in larger lujvo.

-- rab.spir

.i do ba'e glekygau mi ba'o lo nandu djedi ki'e -- mi'e nitcion

Nice try, but I don't like it for the same reason I don't like "me'anrai" for "least". These are jbocre: gismu != primitives asic concepts, and need a gismu. Still, I could almost live with it. (Not "unanalyzable concepts" but basic concepts in their usefulness for speaking.) -- Adam

me'anrai? I've already got rairme'a right there. And me'anrai would give exactly the wrong place structure.

Anyway, I know it would be nice if this could be done with a single gismu - but the gismu list is the way it is. If you insist on attempting to change the gismu list, I suggest not taking over an existing gismu, but using unofficial gismu. Perhaps razma and rarme?

Okay, maybe. But remember that even the Book agrees that the above is the place structure for lujvo which end in -rai. -- Adam

.... Because (yes, I'm coming clean), I thought it was obvious that -rai lujvo would be 'most', not 'least', and the comparandum should be the x2. I abide by this inconsistency, 'cause I hate traji, and if I'm going to propose a capricious place structure, I might as well do it for a whole entire class of 'em, where it's conspicuous and people can raise their objections right away. Yes, I am a hypocrite; you got me. (OTOH, John wasn't obligated to agree with me, but he did.) But I still think you can do that for lujvo, where there is some wiggle room in what the place structure will be, but not for gismu, where the place structure is baselined. -- nitcion.