Talk:le saske smani
Posted by adamgarrigus on Fri 28 of July, 2006 23:46 GMT posts: 92 Thanks again, xorxes. This was a real & inspiring pleasure. A couple of comments:
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ni'o bu'u lo sicyxindo daplu lo zdani cu jibni lo ricfoi Given that "West Indies" is an erroneous term, I question whether the calque sicyxindo is the best translation. Perhaps me la karib would be better.
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ni'o ku'i le saske smani cu jajgau lo so'o citmau smani lo sepli diklo gi'e jundi zmadu se tirna Do you need se jundi zmadu se tirna or else se tirju'i zmadu here?
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i lu pa mai sei le prije cu cusku lo remna cu xusra lo du'u ma'a na cortu gi'e zmidai i se ki'u bo mi prane zifre lo nu xusra lo mintu lo remna i lu la'e di'u cu cizra sei le darlu nelci cu cusku i ji'a du'ospo i ga nai zmidai gi ctuca ma'a no da ma'a i ga nai ctuca su'o da gi to io branarge toi ja'a cortu li'u I think you skipped a li'u after remna.
mu'o mi'e komfo,amonan no'u va'i zoi gy adamgarrigus gy
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Posted by Anonymous on Mon 31 of July, 2006 13:34 GMT On 7/28/06, adamgarrigus wrote: > Re: le saske smani > Thanks again, xorxes. This was a real & inspiring pleasure. A couple of comments:
ki'e doi komfo
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> ni'o bu'u lo sicyxindo daplu lo zdani cu jibni lo ricfoi > Given that "West Indies" is an erroneous term, I question whether the calque sicyxindo is the best translation. Perhaps me la karib would be better.
I don't know. The name reflects the history of the place. I'm not saying this should be the preferred name for the region, but it's common enough.
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> ni'o ku'i le saske smani cu jajgau lo so'o citmau smani lo sepli diklo gi'e jundi zmadu se tirna > Do you need se jundi zmadu se tirna or else se tirju'i zmadu here?
In a tanru, the transformation of anything other than the tertau doesn't usually contribute much. I was thinking {se tirna be lo jundi zmadu}.
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> i lu pa mai sei le prije cu cusku lo remna cu xusra lo du'u ma'a na cortu gi'e zmidai i se ki'u bo mi prane zifre lo nu xusra lo mintu lo remna i lu la'e di'u cu cizra sei le darlu nelci cu cusku i ji'a du'ospo i ga nai zmidai gi ctuca ma'a no da ma'a i ga nai ctuca su'o da gi to io branarge toi ja'a cortu li'u > I think you skipped a li'u after remna.
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Posted by Anonymous on Sun 14 of Sep., 2008 17:53 GMT On Sun, Sep 14, 2008 at 1:47 PM, arj wrote: > > doi xorxes ma selcme le se fanva be fu ti .i milxe vajni tu'a zoi zoi http://www.lojban.org/tiki/BPFK+Section%3A+Contact+Spatial zoi
zoi zoi The Scientific Ape zoi cu glico tcita lo lisri
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arj Posted by arj on Sun 14 of Sep., 2008 19:01 GMT posts: 953 On Sun, Sep 14, 2008 at 02:53:01PM -0300, Jorge Llambías wrote: > On Sun, Sep 14, 2008 at 1:47 PM, arj wrote: > > > > doi xorxes ma selcme le se fanva be fu ti .i milxe vajni tu'a zoi zoi http://www.lojban.org/tiki/BPFK+Section%3A+Contact+Spatial zoi > > zoi zoi The Scientific Ape zoi cu glico tcita lo lisri
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Posted by arj on Sun 14 of Sep., 2008 16:44 GMT posts: 953 doi xorxes ma selcme le se fanva be fu ti .i milxe vajni tu'a zoi zoi http://www.lojban.org/tiki/BPFK+Section%3A+Contact+Spatial zoi